My microtheme is on why people choose to eat fast food. I was able to come with reasons super quickly for the problem. However, what I find challenging is the conclusion. It s difficult trying to end the essay without trying to give out solutions or adding extra information. I am going to look at the other samples and try to see how others ended their essay.
Your conclusion tried to make clear WHY the question you've been exploring is valuable. So, how does thinking about these causes shift your thinking about why people eat fast food? Does it move you to be less judgmental? MOre attentive to your own choices? ...
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